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I will probably send the first version I did : an Ocre one.
Please tell me what is bad in the picture.
I changed the eyes, now they are more expressive, and the little wing is better now. If other things are bad, tell me what please
Commissed by Fasake
Portrait of her lovely gone Lily : A gorgeous mink female rat. She was stout-bellied, and had a real problem of obesity.
Please, don't use without permission
© Lunëwen
Using photoshop CS4
Lining classical
Coloring smooth
Shading fluffy
model : Lily
I will probably send the first version I did : an Ocre one.
Please tell me what is bad in the picture.
I changed the eyes, now they are more expressive, and the little wing is better now. If other things are bad, tell me what please
Commissed by Fasake
Portrait of her lovely gone Lily : A gorgeous mink female rat. She was stout-bellied, and had a real problem of obesity.
Please, don't use without permission
© Lunëwen
Using photoshop CS4
Lining classical
Coloring smooth
Shading fluffy
model : Lily
Image size
1067x800px 799.53 KB
© 2010 - 2024 Lunewen
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Yay! My first critique! Lunewen, this is beautiful! It's so sweet and I love the colors, and like always, the eyes are my absolutel favorite part. I only have a couple quick critiques, and since this is a WIP I don't know if these are things you're going back to work on later. On the darker brown on her lowerhalf, and the greyer spots, the speckling seems really stark compared to the rest. I think a really light blend will fix that quick. On the wings, a little more definition around the feathers would help so it looks like they're overlaying, because right now they appear a bit flat. I hope this helps.