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Sketch Dump 5

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Two years after the last Sketch Dump, I publish you a new one.  
I'm not dead, but I work on two commissions and my comic, so I don't publish regularly, I'm sorry! 
This Sketch dump presents you two new species:
The Khurûns (pronounce the "û" as the "oo" of tooth"), the lightning (electricity) spirits, you can't see them in totality in this scrap but they'll appear in the comic! They are gendered (not herm, they're male or female).
The Othalas are the waves spirits, they appear in the comic at page 6 too ;)
Eldanin... is just a portrait of Eldanin :heart:
And Thymëria, the pehlow, this is her (cause she's female, not herm as I wanted at first) new color desing (without hairs). Sorry for the strange colors and to haven't send the new scanned version, with the yellow parts, I'll perhaps update it later :)
And the little cat is a commission :)

Artworks and characters © Lunëwen
Please do not use the drawings related to The Spirit of Ethil
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FalconArte's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Okay, I'm gonna start by saying that I think you have a very good feel for anatomy, especially in the way you lay out faces, human and animal. Also, I think you do muscles really nicely! Not too buff, but enough that the viewer can see the strength! I really love your antlered feline and the Othala heads. Those stand out most to me!
As far as improvement goes, there is little to say about your technique. Your lineart is sharp and the coloring has nice contrast. The only thing I really see (that I would change myself) is that you have the "ankles" of your animals kinda high. I probably woulda put 'em down a bit lower on the leg. Looking at pictures of foxes and coyotes, I see a lower joint than you've got on your Thymeria.
Anyhow, REALLY good work! I love it! Keep it up!